Desere's 2nd Story Commentary

ah! this is a describing story too! I just realized this. She is not telling the story, she's telling ABOUT the story. i think i get it. She has not processed that the story and the voice part go to gether... not till her last story! She wrote a story... and now she's describing her story vocally. She sees the digital process as two separate events.

I wonder what made her make the leap in that last story.

I might have messed her up with the words. She wanted them on each page, but I should have copied and pasted them separately... 1 star, 2 star, etc. Instead of all in one bunch.

Here too was seeking more from the the technology... a manipulation... she asked me to do the cutting and pasting. She was not limited by what she knew how to do. She merely asked for it to be done.

This is an attempt at a number/counting story that she has probably run into in her reading life. I think this was the only story that fit into a traditional genre. (except for Bryce and his scifi kinda stuff.}

Genres I think I have seen in these stories:
fatal realism - lots of life sux stories like Des' duck story below.
The description of the story
The description of how the technology was manipulated.
More traditional stories.


There is not a description of the picture. It's a description of the story she wrote.

I think stars/clouds are her anchor. The place she starts to get her juices going.