Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Michael 3rd story analysis

The money continues! This was a very independent effort. Unlike the 2nd story, Michael did not ask for help to do anything with this. What is interesting to me is the very distinct style of each student artist. I love the people Michael draws. I wonder if he draws them like this in his regular writing. Perhaps I need to scan his writing and see.

I consider this a traditional story... characters, plot movement.

Characters: has moved on from family. Here's a "man" who faces a violent end. These kids find violence interesting/funny/entertaining. Okay you say that's a typical little boy thing and that's true. But the girls did it too. (Arianna and Deseree)

This one, like most of the third stories, were recorded independently. That is, on the first ones I recorded for them, but on this one they did it on their own. Might explain the lilt toward violent deaths and blood!

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